(02-10-2026, 07:36 PM)badrav Wrote: @b789 got this from previous post, sorry didn't know about the forum

If you could please advise

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(02-11-2026, 11:42 AM)Thanks v much, I havent had anything back from them so but didnt know about AOS, should I try to submit a defence?b789 Wrote: Of all the documents you've linked to, this is the only one that matters:



Have you submitted your defence yet? You can use the MCOL deadline calculator I created to check the deadlines here: MCOL Deadline Calculator.

You had until 4pm on Monday 02 February to submit your defence or, if you submitted an Acknowledgement of Service (AoS), you have until 4pm on Monday 16th February.

It is getting close to the deadline if you did submit an AoS, so let me know and I can give you a suitable defence you can submit.

(02-13-2026, 05:52 AM)Is there a defence to submit?This is the FTLA link https://www.ftla.uk/private-parking-tickets/pcn-from-'civil-enforcement-ltd'-4166/msg106932/#msg106932The last post didnt come up until I saw it now Wrote:

(02-11-2026, 11:42 AM)Thanks v much, I havent had anything back from them so but didnt know about AOS, should I try to submit a defence?b789 Wrote: Of all the documents you've linked to, this is the only one that matters:

Have you submitted your defence yet? You can use the MCOL deadline calculator I created to check the deadlines here: MCOL Deadline Calculator.
You had until 4pm on Monday 02 February to submit your defence or, if you submitted an Acknowledgement of Service (AoS), you have until 4pm on Monday 16th February.
It is getting close to the deadline if you did submit an AoS, so let me know and I can give you a suitable defence you can submit.

(02-16-2026, 02:04 PM)b789 Wrote: @badrav , You don't have to include all the previous responses when you reply. It is quite difficult to see what you are actually asking

I need to clarify a few thinsg first. Have you responded at all to the Claim you have received? You can check the deadlines you had by using this MCOL Calculator I have created here:

MCOL Deadline Calculator

If you have not responded yet, it is highly likely that you will have a CCJ by default. If you have submitted an AoS, you have until 4pm today to submit a defence. Please let em know ASAP where you are at with this.

Quote:Until very recently, we never advised using the MCOL to submit a defence. However, due to recent systemic failures within the CNBC, we feel that it is safer to now submit a short defence using MCOL as it is instantly submitted and entered into the "system". Whilst it will deny the use of some formatting or inclusion of transcripts etc. these can always be included with the Witness Statement (WS) later, if it ever progresses that far.


You will need to copy and paste it into the defence text box on MCOL. It has been checked to make sure that it will fit into the 122 lines limit. 

1. The Defendant denies the claim in its entirety. The Defendant asserts that there is no liability to the Claimant and that no debt is owed. The claim is without merit and does not adequately disclose any comprehensible cause of action.

2. There is a lack of precise detail in the Particulars of Claim (PoC) in respect of the factual and legal allegations made against the Defendant such that the PoC do not adequately comply with CPR 16.4.

3. The Defendant is unable to plead properly to the PoC because:

(a) The contract referred to is not detailed or attached to the PoC in accordance with PD 16, para 7.3(1);
(b) The PoC do not state the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract (or contracts) which is/are relied on;
(c) The PoC do not adequately set out the reason (or reasons) why the claimant asserts the defendant has breached the contract (or contracts);
(d) The PoC do not state with sufficient particularity exactly where the breach occurred, the exact time when the breach occurred and how long it is alleged that the vehicle was parked before the parking charge was allegedly incurred;
(e) The PoC do not state precisely how the sum claimed is calculated, including the basis for any statutory interest, damages, or other charges;
(f) The PoC do not state what proportion of the claim is the parking charge and what proportion is damages;
(g) The PoC do not provide clarity on whether the Defendant is sued as the driver or the keeper of the vehicle, as the claimant cannot plead alternative causes of action without specificity.

4. The Defendant submits that courts have previously struck out materially similar claims of their own initiative for failure to adequately comply with CPR 16.4, particularly where the Particulars of Claim failed to specify the contractual terms relied upon or explain the alleged breach with sufficient clarity.

5. In comparable cases involving modest sums, judges have found that requiring further case management steps would be disproportionate and contrary to the overriding objective. Accordingly, strike-out was deemed appropriate. The Defendant submits that the same reasoning applies in this case and invites the court to adopt a similar approach by striking out the claim due to the Claimant’s failure to adequately comply with CPR 16.4, rather than permitting an amendment. The Defendant proposes that the following Order be made:

Draft Order:

Of the Court's own initiative and upon reading the particulars of claim and the defence.

AND the court being of the view that the particulars of claim do not adequately comply with CPR 16.4(1)(a) because: (a) they do not set out the exact wording of the clause (or clauses) of the terms and conditions of the contract which is (or are) relied on; and (b) they do not adequately set out the reason (or reasons) why the claimant asserts that the defendant was in breach of contract.

AND the claimant could have complied with CPR 16.4(1)(a) had it served separate detailed particulars of claim, as it could have done pursuant to PD 7C, para 5.2, but chose not to do so.

AND upon the Court determining, having regard to the overriding objective (CPR 1.1), that it would be disproportionate to direct further pleadings or to allot any further share of the Court’s resources to this claim (for example by ordering further particulars of claim and a further defence, with consequent case management).

ORDER:
1. The claim is struck out.
2. Permission to either party to apply to set aside, vary or stay this order by application on notice, which must be filed at this Court not more than 7 days after service of this order, failing which no such application may be made.